~Until The Thunder Arrives~ ~*~Dawn's POTW For 07/20/08~*~
UNTIL THE THUNDER ARRIVES Dark skies mean nothing. Bored am I. Come, rain. Our bodies will be the landscape; Across it, a storm will brew. We'll create our own chaos; Lightning will strike; Our own...
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wowwwwwza Cherrimeister~ I don't have the opportunity to venture often into Venus, but I'm glad I did tonight....this is AWESOME....and is also my pick for Poem of the Week **Hugs and smoochers**...
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Wow, Dawnie.... This is just something crazy my muse literally threw my way and I don't turn her out when she does, but I never ever expected an award let alone POTW. You're so kind. Thank you bunches...
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Congratulations on POTW, Cherri! Such a wonderful write, sweet friend!
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MattNJake1 wrote: Congratulations on POTW, Cherri! Such a wonderful write, sweet friend! Thanks so so much, Steph! Hugs,
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CONGRATS! Cheri: I love storms, and love-making during storms.. and of course there are those "stormy times" when there is unfulfilled desire.. NJOYED !!
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Ayana, Thanks for the read and congrats. I'm not a fan of loud storm but there is something great about competing with it, lol.
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Congradulations winning ROTD, thats one hellish thunder storm!! Nice work. HUGS Debb
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Debb, Thank you so much!!! I appreciate your stopping by to read and comment!
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Oh, Cherri, I love this! I really like how you wove this metaphor, the words you used... and the ideas it gave me LOL
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janmew wrote: Oh, Cherri, I love this! I really like how you wove this metaphor, the words you used... and the ideas it gave me LOL Hey, Jan, I'm every so appreciative of your comments and I remember...
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Sometimes the waiting is almost unbearable but when that moment arrives all else is erased in an instant I loved the picture M lady it says almost as much as your well chosen words
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poeticpiers wrote: Sometimes the waiting is almost unbearable but when that moment arrives all else is erased in an instant I loved the picture M lady it says almost as much as your well chosen words...
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Now this m'friend, is awesome. I love metaphors used in sensual poetry, I think it makes it even more flavorful. I am a huge fan of yours but then, you know this already. Hugs hon ~D
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Whispered Rhapsody wrote: Now this m'friend, is awesome. I love metaphors used in sensual poetry, I think it makes it even more flavorful. I am a huge fan of yours but then, you know this already....
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Holy WOW Woman! This is fantastic! The graphic that goes with is a wonderful touch ... but the poetry has power and stands alone. Many congratulations Chickie! That's what I'm talkin' 'bout ~ Whew!...
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(((Cherri))) This was a gentle rain...I loved the soft sensual side of this that just dripped down the page in soft poetic whispers that touch the heart and soul....nicely done ;) Love and hugs, Tammy
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TRC Beaver wrote: Holy WOW Woman! This is fantastic! The graphic that goes with is a wonderful touch ... but the poetry has power and stands alone. Many congratulations Chickie! That's what I'm...
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SpiritWalker5 wrote: (((Cherri))) This was a gentle rain...I loved the soft sensual side of this that just dripped down the page in soft poetic whispers that touch the heart and soul....nicely done ;)...
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Well, I don't know if I'm allowed to comment but this was movingly powerful Whew is right. The hair on the back of my neck is standing up. (no comments please);) To bad the rains have left this part...
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